[POEMS] For a Snowy Day
These are poems I wrote during two separate winters in Tennessee. The first, I wrote today, following an ice storm that destroyed trees, took out power lines, and left the city a somewhat treacherous wonderland. The second, with a more cheerful tone, I wrote two years ago after a lovely snow week.
Nonetheless, the Morn
A winter storm has stilled the spinning earth.
Encased, it waits for sleet-gray clouds to pass;
And pink spring buds, in delicate new birth,
Now suffocate beneath the timeless glass.
The boughs of trees are stripped, the streets are bound;
Falling ice is like a death toll ringing.
Its severed spirit grips the iron ground;
Silent is the world that once was singing.
There, ice, like sharpened silver tinsel, shines
Upon a wasteland shattered by the cold,
Until the sun, to fiery cause resigned,
In war eternal, burns alight with gold.
And so the trees emerge with branches shorn,
To morning scourged, but nonetheless, the morn.
If you wake up in the morning…
If you wake up in the morning
And the world is still and quiet,
Then it snowed while you were sleeping
And the snow is soft and silent.
Like a blanket in the darkness,
It has draped over the branches;
It has fallen on the rooftops
In a daze of snowflake dances.
It has whispered on the windowpanes,
Across scattered, frosty windshields,
It has settled on the winter plains,
And in the frozen, silver wheatfields.
It has polished silt-black riversides
Into sheets of crisp white crystal,
And whittled lakes of purest shine
With a piercing, cobalt chisel.
And now the sunlight glows like gold
On the symphony of snowbanks,
A melt of milk and honey through
The glittering gelid cascades.
And the world is still and quiet here,
Beneath a glassy, light blue sky;
The world is soft and silent here,
In the warm bed where you lie.
And the world is just and peaceful here,
And the sun is glowing bright,
And the world is kind and gentle here,
Because the snow fell late last night.

I think I especially love how you put these two poems in conversation with one another. I remember reading this when you published it the first time, and I honestly did not notice the intricate connections they had with one another until I revisited them today. The connotations of monetary value spread out throughout them both is something especially interesting; in the first poem, it's "sharpened silver tinsel." In the second poem, the sunlight "glows like gold" (and this is also evident in the first poem with "burns alight with gold"). There is one prominent thing I gather from this usage: nature of the weather is intricately connected with nature of the earth. The beauty of the ice and sun is entangled with the beauty of the under-earth, the minerals that have been exploited. The ice and sun venerate the minerals by exposing their power on both civilization and the dualist war in the same way the minerals have oppressed civilization with their own power. You can also see this entanglement with "iron ground." I do not think this is the most important thing gathered from your poems, but they definitely bolster one of the themes in your poems; I also genuinely loved them so much more after realizing this.
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